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how a pellet stove and a pellet boiler operate

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The shown processes illustrate the way a pellet stove, and a pellet boiler operate to make the place or water warmer. Overall, it is clear that, both the stove and boiler need wood pellets to start functioning, and they both end up producing hot water or air. Starting with the pellet stove, first of all, we add wood pellets to the fuel hopper, the wood pellets would come down and the fuel feeding process would start. The wood pellets will turn into a fire in the combustion chamber and the leftover ash would come down the ash pan. And the hot air would rise from the combustion chamber to let the hot air come out of the combustion fan, to warmth the house. Moving to the pellet boiler, to begin with, cold water gets put into the furnace in addition to the wood pellets that would burn to make the water hot, and the ashes will fall into the bottom, and smoke will be released by a smokestack. Eventually, the hot water will run through the building.
The shown processes illustrate the way a
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pellet
stove, and a
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pellet
boiler operate to
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make
the place or
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water
warmer.
Overall
, it is
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clear
that, both the stove and boiler need
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wood
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pellets
to
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start
functioning, and they both
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end
up producing hot
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water
or air.

Starting with the
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pellet
stove,
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first of all
, we
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add
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wood
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pellets
to the fuel hopper, the
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wood
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pellets
would
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come
down and the fuel feeding process would
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start
. The
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wood
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pellets
will turn into a fire in the combustion chamber and the leftover ash would
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come
down the ash pan. And the hot air would rise from the combustion chamber to
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let
the hot air
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come
out of the combustion fan, to warmth the
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house
.

Moving to the
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pellet
boiler, to
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begin
with,
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cold
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water
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gets
put into the furnace
in addition
to the
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wood
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pellets
that would burn to
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make
the
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water
hot, and the ashes will fall into the bottom, and smoke will
be released
by a smokestack.
Eventually
, the hot
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water
will run through the building.
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IELTS essay how a pellet stove and a pellet boiler operate

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
177 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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