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The extent of effect due to various environmental problems is more than the issue caused by any species extinction.

The extent of effect due to various environmental problems is more than the issue caused by any species extinction. 55kPe
According to number of people, loss of particular species of plants and animals is the main problem, yet others believe there are various more concerning environmental issues. Currently pollution and global warming are the reasons for major ecological issues. Therefore that is considered more alarming than extinction of any species. There are several historical events in the past which makes one worry due to the death of some species. For instance, tiger is on the verge of extinction and a lot of activists around the world have taken an initiative to preserve it. Similarly our government has started many reservoirs to protect and prevent many endangered species. However, some environmental problems like global warming pollutions and ozone depletion are more dangerous than any other ecological issues. The increase in sea level and the change in rainfall and multiple national calamities is caused by global warming. In the other hand the contamination of water, air and land due to various pollutants worsen our living condition and it is causing numerous health issues in both plant, animal and humans which remains as one of the major cause for loss of species. In the same way, UV radiation due to the depletion of ozone layer causes severe skin related issues like skin cancer in humans and animals, death of plats, acid rains and several other issues. In conclusion, the extent of effect due to various environmental problems is more than the issue caused by any species extinction.
According to number of
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people
, loss of particular species of plants and animals is the main problem,
yet
others believe there are various more concerning environmental
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issues
.
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Currently
pollution and global warming are the reasons for major ecological
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issues
.
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Therefore
that
is considered
more alarming than extinction of any species.

There are several historical
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events
in the past which
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makes
one worry
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due
to the death of
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some
species.
For instance
, tiger is on the verge of extinction and
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a lot of
activists around the world have taken an initiative to preserve it.
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Similarly
our
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government
has
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started
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many
reservoirs to protect and
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prevent
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many
endangered species.

However
,
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some
environmental problems like global warming pollutions and ozone depletion are more
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dangerous
than any
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other
ecological
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issues
. The increase in sea level and the
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change
in rainfall and multiple national calamities
is caused
by global warming. In the
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other
hand the contamination of water, air and land
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due
to various pollutants worsen our living condition and it is causing numerous health
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issues
in both plant, animal and humans which remains as one of the major cause for loss of species.
In the same way
, UV radiation
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due
to the depletion of ozone layer causes severe skin related
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issues
like skin cancer in humans and animals, death of plats, acid rains and several
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
issues.

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In
conclusion, the extent of effect
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due
to various environmental problems is more than the
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issue
caused by any species extinction.
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IELTS essay The extent of effect due to various environmental problems is more than the issue caused by any species extinction.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
244 words
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