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Household chores in the family

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Nowadays, as women and men have to work full time, so household duties should be equally divided. Similar to many families, both of my parents work everyday and they are very busy and also my family is aware how difficult it is to do all the housework alone. So we always have a good cooperation in doing household chores. In my fami, y, my mom handle most of the chores around the house. She takes responsibility for groceries and specially, she didvides the time scientifically so everything is done perfectly. As for my dad, althought he spends most of his time in company, he often takes charge of doing heavy lifting. Me and my brother also split the rest of housework to help my parents. With me, in the morning I do the laundry and tidy up my room. After that, I like watering the flowers because it makes me feel comfortable, reduce stress and I can enjoy glorious landscape in front of my house. Sometimes, I do the vacuum cleaning and mop the floor to make my house look spotless. Being the youngest child in my family, taking out the rubbish and feeding the dog after dinner are part of my brother’s daily routine. Most people receive enormous benefit when sharing the household chores, they could be considered a good example for their children. Besides, doing domestic chores together is likely to be a great way to help families closer and create a cozy atmosphere.
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, both of my parents work
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is aware how difficult it is to do all the housework alone.
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. In my
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around the
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. She takes responsibility for groceries and
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and my brother
also
split the rest of housework to
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my parents. With me, in the morning I do the laundry and tidy up my room. After that, I like watering the flowers
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and I can enjoy glorious landscape in front of my
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Sometimes
, I do the vacuum cleaning and mop the floor to
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make
my
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house
look spotless. Being the youngest child in my
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family
, taking out the rubbish and feeding the dog after dinner are part of my brother’s daily routine. Most
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people
receive enormous benefit when sharing the household
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chores
, they could
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example for their children.
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, doing domestic
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together is likely to be a great way to
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help
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closer and create a cozy atmosphere.
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IELTS essay Household chores in the family

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
246 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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