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Describe/talk about your best friend

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I would like to describe my best friend, Phong, whom I have known for roughly 11 years. I first met him at primary school when she was my classmate.  At first, he was quite shy and did not want to talk with anyone, which made me feel that he was a bit proud.  However, when we became close friends, she was more sociable and extrovert. We have done a lot of things together. Studying at the same schools, we have various mutual friends. So, we usually play football, go swimming at the weekends or have a picnic together. Besides, whenever I get into trouble, I turn to her for help. For example, I remember when I got bad marks in the exam, he consoled me and then we studied together until the official exam took place.  Finally, we had the opportunity to study at our favorite high school, which is called “CHV” At present, despite the fact that we have different plans and goals to pursue, I believe that we will be best friends for good and we will try our best to maintain this relationship.
I would like to
describe
my best friend,
Phong
, whom I have known for roughly 11 years. I
first
met him at primary school when she was my classmate.  At
first
, he was quite shy and did not want to talk with anyone, which made me feel that he was a bit proud.  
However
, when we became close friends, she was more sociable and extrovert. We have done 
a lot of
things together. Studying at the same schools, we have various mutual friends.
So
, we
usually
 play football, go swimming at the weekends or have a picnic together.

Besides
, whenever I
get
into trouble, I turn to her for
help
.
For example
, I remember when I
got
bad
marks in the exam, he consoled 
me and
then we studied together until the official exam took place.  
Finally
, we had the opportunity to study at our favorite high school, which
is called
“CHV”

At present, despite the fact that we have
different
 plans and goals to pursue, I believe that we will be best friends for
good and
we will try our best to maintain this relationship.
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IELTS essay Describe/talk about your best friend

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
156 words
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