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hospital city from 2007 to 2010

hospital city from 2007 to 2010 m3nXO

the infrastructure of the city is complete improving during the time and that because the number of the people is increasing and the modern life style is changed during the time. in this essay i will discuss the difference in the city hospital area and how it developed from 2007 to 2010. the main changes from the past is that they add more than one thing around the hospital city area which are public car park in the right, two roundabouts in the south, and a bus station in the left south. and these the main fetchers in the 2010. in 2007 was only the main hospital road with the city road and a small car park. also there are only 6 bus stops. to conclude we can say that always we develop and improve our cities to make our life more comfortable and to have a high level of quality of living.

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 infrastructure of the city is complete improving during the time and that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
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 is increasing and the modern life style is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
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 will discuss the difference in the city hospital area and how it developed from 2007 to 2010.

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 from the past is that they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 more than one thing around the hospital city area which are public car park in the right, two roundabouts in the south, and a bus station in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
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 these the main fetchers in the 2010.

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 2007 was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
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 the main hospital road with the city road and a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
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 car park. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?also,
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 there are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
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 6 bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasesdiscontinues
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 conclude we can say that always we develop and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 our life more comfortable and to have a high level of quality of living. 