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Hman activity has had negtive effect on plant and animals around the world. Some people think that it cannot be changed but while some think action can be bring to about the change. Discuss both and your views

Hman activity has had negtive effect on plant and animals around the world. Some people think that it cannot be changed but while some think action can be bring to about the change. Discuss both and your views G38BQ
Undoubtedly, in contemporary days are witnessing alarming rise in global warming that has imposed deletrious consequences on the whole ecosystem owing to which a lot of masses contend this menace cannot be tackled; However, other assert that this trouble can be curb by the meant of awarness. Hence, I am of the opinion that in this essay i will address both school of thought along with suitable judgement. On the one hand, a lot of causes are aggrovating this view point. The first is, the green jungle converted in to the concrete ones at the manumental scale, More-specifically, deforestation is gulping the natural habitat's of the animals, have been scummbed. The second is, it has been proven fact that a lot of animals are surrendring their breathing. In-detail, it had been seen that polar bears are now heading towards in the urban areas that are being killing due to self defanse. On the other hand, a plethora of changes can be annouced by masses. Intially, I believe a ten thousand steps of journey started by a single step it is the old clicha but still true. Beside this, Govt. should organise the awarness camps to plant more and more trees. For instance, Govt should follow the foot steps of phillipanes nation that has implement the law to pant minimum 10 trees to grab graduated degree. In-addition, Govt ought to be given green flags on wildlife santchury and natural park where animals can live their life with full of safety and security. After this discussion, I would like to say that later view holds more water since, changes kill the bad situation. In my opinon, Inland is the happiest nation as green land is more while sitting in the lap of the nature masses can stay away from threatning diseseas. Finally, animals and plants is very crucial to mantain the food chain. To conclude, undeniably, a mind of man can concived it can be achieved, and it is the moral duty of the masses to save our enviorment.
Undoubtedly
, in contemporary days are witnessing alarming rise in global warming that has imposed
deletrious
consequences
on the whole
ecosystem owing to which
a lot of
masses contend this menace cannot
be tackled
;
However
, other assert that this trouble can be
curb
by the meant of
awarness
.
Hence
, I am of the opinion that in this essay
i
will address both school of
thought
along with suitable judgement.

On the one hand,
a lot of
causes are
aggrovating
this view point. The
first
is, the green jungle converted in to the concrete ones at the
manumental
scale, More-
specifically
, deforestation is gulping the natural habitat's of the
animals
, have been
scummbed
. The second is, it has
been proven
fact that
a lot of
animals
are
surrendring
their breathing. In-detail, it had been
seen
that polar bears are
now
heading towards in the urban areas that are being killing due to self
defanse
.

On the other hand
, a plethora of
changes
can be
annouced
by masses.
Intially
, I believe a ten thousand steps of journey
started
by a single step it is the
old
clicha
but
still
true. Beside this, Govt. should
organise
the
awarness
camps to plant more and more trees.
For instance
, Govt should follow the foot steps of
phillipanes
nation that has
implement
the law to pant minimum 10 trees to grab graduated degree. In-addition, Govt ought to be
given
green flags on wildlife
santchury
and natural park where
animals
can
live
their life with full of safety and security.

After this discussion, I would like to say that later view holds more water since,
changes
kill the
bad
situation.

In my
opinon
, Inland is the happiest nation as green land is more while sitting in the lap of the nature masses can stay away from
threatning
diseseas
.
Finally
,
animals
and plants is
very
crucial to
mantain
the food chain.

To conclude
,
undeniably
, a mind of
man
can
concived
it can
be achieved
, and it is the moral duty of the masses to save our
enviorment
.
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IELTS essay Hman activity has had negtive effect on plant and animals around the world. Some people think that it cannot be changed but while some think action can be bring to about the change. Discuss both and your views

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