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history. The year 2020 (so far) has been like no other. The year got off to a promising start with the booming economy generating strong demand for IT products and services. But then the COVID-19 pandemic struck, followed by a shuttered economy, a recession and a new work-from-home reality for millions o...

history. The year 2020 (so far) has been like no other. The year got off to a promising start with the booming economy generating strong demand for IT products and services. But then the COVID-19 pandemic struck, followed by a shuttered economy, a recession and a new work-from-home reality for millions o. . . 9awEn
history. The year 2020 (so far) has been like no other. The year got off to a promising start with the booming economy generating strong demand for IT products and services. But then the COVID-19 pandemic struck, followed by a shuttered economy, a recession and a new work-from-home reality for millions o. . . history. The year 2020 (so far) has been like no other. The year got off to a promising start with the booming economy generating strong demand for IT products and services. But then the COVID-19 pandemic struck, followed by a shuttered economy, a recession and a new work-from-home reality for millions o. . . history. The year 2020 (so far) has been like no other. The year got off to a promising start with the booming economy generating strong demand for IT products and services. But then the COVID-19 pandemic struck, followed by a shuttered economy, a recession and a new work-from-home reality for millions o. . .
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off to a promising
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with the booming
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economy
generating strong demand for IT products and services.
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then the COVID-19 pandemic struck, followed by a shuttered
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economy
, a recession and a new work-from-home reality for millions o.
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2020 (
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so
far) has been like no other. The
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year
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got
off to a promising
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
with the booming
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economy
generating strong demand for IT products and services.
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But
then the COVID-19 pandemic struck, followed by a shuttered
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economy
, a recession and a new work-from-home reality for millions o.
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IELTS essay history. The year 2020 (so far) has been like no other. The year got off to a promising start with the booming economy generating strong demand for IT products and services. But then the COVID-19 pandemic struck, followed by a shuttered economy, a recession and a new work-from-home reality for millions o. . .

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