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Do young people interested in healthy food

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Although health and fitness are very important for our health. Yet I don't think young people are very interested in their health. because of the high technology products Despite there being lots of ways to choose from. But the young people don't mention that they are not very healthy. For example, some young people use their mobile phones to play games when they use phones a lot, their eyes cannot bear it. If they still watch it, their eyes will hurt. The food they choose is not healthy, either. Most of the food markets have vegetables, meat, and some healthy food. But the young people even don’t pay any attention to that. The fast-food and junk food they eat is unhealthy. Most of that has a lot of oil and salt in it. I think young people don't do any exercise. They just stay at home the whole day and even don't want to move. That makes them lazy. Sometimes when they have to go somewhere, even though it's near their house, they won't walk there.

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