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high school students are encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers. There is, however, a more persuasive argument that the result is a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom

high school students are encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers. There is, however, a more persuasive argument that the result is a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom KV0QL
It is a common belief that high school students are encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers. There is, however, a more persuasive argument that the result is a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. In this essay, I will look at both viewpoints before drawing a reasoned conclusion. On the one hand, a school of thought holds that students review their teachers is a good way to improve quality lessons for several reasons. Firstly, that the teacher is given some good feedback from their student at the end of the course is a great idea, and it helps them create an enjoyable lesson for their students. Secondly, it is easier for headmasters to manage their teacher through assessment periods which are supported by student feedbacks. For example, as the saying goes “a complaint is a gift”, for when students send lecturers some comments about what they want, they need, they are interested in the lesson, surely the lecture will be more meaningful and useful. On the other hand, there is no doubt that losing respect for teachers, for students allowed to evaluate and criticize their teachers is also much more crucial. For one thing, the fact that while the teachers try to enhance their teaching method, in contrast, the students just blame the teacher for their faults. Moreover, it is very difficult for teachers to control their classroom when students do not obey them, and easier to lead that students neglect their study. For instance, many students directly react to lecturers that they do not figure out a reason to do homework, and they hold the opinion that the customer who has to pay the tuition fee, they are allowed to freely enter the classroom despite the school rule. In conclusion, this essay acknowledges that reviewing teachers is one way to enhance the teaching method for students and educators, it is undeniable that complaining about the teachers is careful consideration as not to lead students to look down on teachers.
It is a common belief that high school
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students
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to evaluate and criticize their
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. There is,
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, a more persuasive argument that the result is a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. In this essay, I will look at both viewpoints
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before
drawing a reasoned conclusion.

On the one hand, a school of
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thought
holds that
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students
review their
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teachers
is a
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good
way to
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improve
quality lessons for several reasons.
Firstly
, that the
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teacher
is
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given
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some
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good
feedback from their
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at the
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end
of the course is a great
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, and it
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helps
them create an enjoyable lesson for their
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students
.
Secondly
, it is easier for headmasters to manage their
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teacher
through assessment periods which
are supported
by
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student
feedbacks.
For example
, as the saying goes “a complaint is a gift”, for when
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students
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send
lecturers
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some
comments about what they want, they need, they
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surely
the lecture will be more meaningful and useful.

On the other hand
, there is no doubt that losing respect for
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teachers
, for
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students
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allowed
to evaluate and criticize their
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is
also
much more crucial. For one thing, the fact that while the
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teachers
try to enhance their teaching method,
in contrast
, the
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students
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just
blame the
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teacher
for their faults.
Moreover
, it is
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very
difficult for
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teachers
to control their classroom when
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do not obey them, and easier to lead that
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students
neglect their study.
For instance
,
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many
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students
directly
react to lecturers that they do not figure out a reason to do homework, and they hold the opinion that the customer who
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has to
pay the tuition fee, they are
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allowed
to
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enter the classroom despite the school
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rule
.

In conclusion
, this essay acknowledges that reviewing
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teachers
is one way to enhance the teaching method for
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students
and educators, it is undeniable that complaining about the
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teachers
is careful consideration as not to lead
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students
to look down on
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teachers
.
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IELTS essay high school students are encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers. There is, however, a more persuasive argument that the result is a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
333 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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