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High school should let students choose the subjects that they want to study do you agree or disagree use specific example and reason to support your view

High school should let students choose the subjects that they want to study use specific example and reason to support your view 85jdk
In the cut short competitive live education become most vital for major role in everyone life. Hence, high school is a turning point for students to show their interest and to make future bright. Myriad people differ their opinion that High school should let students choice the subjects that they want to study but in my opinion I completely agree with the statement I personally deem that each and student at beginning of the school must learn various subject as they can. The discussion will be presented below with my opinion. On the one hand, many people say that students is of subject should be emulated by High schools. Firstly, if students create own schedule then they might be produced and generate the power of imagination on their interest. In addition to, various children are unmatured so they cannot able to select the subject what they like or dislike. For instance, if students found difficulty in mathematics and proffer a choice to select their like and dislike subjects then them may shun mathematic. As a result, they can get good grade at the end of the year. However, sometime High school not allowed to students to choose their own subjects because of financial issue. Namely, if students desire to learn a pop music but High school cannot afford that setup of pop music due to limited fund and space problem. In conclusion, it is tool early to leave students to decide that interesting area and goal. I completely agree with the opinion due to if student get their decisions themselves then they might get professional level of performance in the feature on their interest.
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what they like or dislike.
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found difficulty in mathematics and proffer a choice to select their like and dislike
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then them may shun mathematic.
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desire to learn a pop music
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cannot afford that setup of pop music due to limited fund and space problem.

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professional level of performance in the feature on their interest.
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IELTS essay High school should let students choose the subjects that they want to study use specific example and reason to support your view

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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