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When coming to Hanoi you need to pay attention to traffic here. First, there are numerous vehicles on the road during rush hours when everyone is in a hurry to get to come back home after work. Several motorcyclists are lack awareness also go on the sidewalk, causing danger to pedestrians. This leads to traffic congestion for hours, an emergency vehicle like the fire truck or ambulance gets stuck in the traffic. Second, traffic in Hanoi is almost the main problem causing air pollution and noise pollution. To avoid this problem, we should use public transport such as the bus, this solution also helps reduce emissions from vehicles. Many people when participating in traffic intentionally violate traffic laws such as: not wearing helmets, speeding, reckless overtaking, going in the opposite direction, passing red lights. Therefore, the number of traffic accidents is increasing more and more. I feel this problem is really dangerous so we need to raise people's awareness to avoid accidents that shouldn’t happen. Although traffic causes a lot of problems, it is still an indispensable thing in our lives.
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When
coming to Hanoi you need to pay attention to
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traffic
here.
First
, there are numerous vehicles on the road during rush hours when everyone is in a hurry to
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get
to
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come
back home after work. Several motorcyclists are lack awareness
also
go on the sidewalk, causing
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danger
to pedestrians. This leads to
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traffic
congestion for hours, an emergency vehicle like the fire truck or ambulance
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gets
stuck in the
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traffic
. Second,
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traffic
in Hanoi is almost the main
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problem
causing air pollution and noise pollution. To avoid this
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problem
, we should
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use
public transport such as the bus, this solution
also
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helps
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reduce
emissions from vehicles.
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Many
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people
when participating in
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traffic
intentionally
violate
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traffic
laws such as: not wearing helmets, speeding, reckless overtaking, going in the opposite direction, passing red lights.
Therefore
, the number of
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traffic
accidents is increasing more and more. I feel this
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problem
is
really
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dangerous
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so
we need to raise
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people
's awareness to avoid accidents that shouldn’t happen. Although
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traffic
causes
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a lot of
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problems
, it is
still
an indispensable thing in our
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lives
.
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IELTS essay Hentai hentai hentai hentai hentai

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
181 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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