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From front rooms, kitchens and campuses to the streets, ear for eye follows Black families, friends, students and older generations navigating British and American society today. From front rooms, kitchens and campuses to the streets, ear for eye follows Black families, friends, students and older generations navigating British and American society today. From front rooms, kitchens and campuses to the streets, ear for eye follows Black families, friends, students and older generations navigating British and American society today. From front rooms, kitchens and campuses to the streets, ear for eye follows Black families, friends, students and older generations navigating British and American society today. From front rooms, kitchens and campuses to the streets, ear for eye follows Black families, friends, students and older generations navigating British and American society today. From front rooms, kitchens and campuses to the streets, ear for eye follows Black families, friends, students and older generations navigating British and American society today. From front rooms, kitchens and campuses to the streets, ear for eye follows Black families, friends, students and older generations navigating British and American society today. From front rooms, kitchens and campuses to the streets, ear for eye follows Black families, friends, students and older generations navigating British and American society today. From front rooms, kitchens and campuses to the streets, ear for eye follows Black families, friends, students and older generations navigating British and American society today.
From
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front
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rooms
,
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kitchens
and
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campuses
to the
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streets
,
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ear
for
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eye
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follows
Black
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families
,
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friends
,
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students
and
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older
generations
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navigating
British and American
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society
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today
. From
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front
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rooms
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
kitchens
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
campuses
to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
streets
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ear
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
eye
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
follows
Black
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
families
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
older
generations
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
navigating
British and American
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
today
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
From
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
front
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rooms
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
kitchens
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
campuses
to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
streets
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ear
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
eye
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
follows
Black
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
families
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
older
generations
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
navigating
British and American
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
today
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
From
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
front
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rooms
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
kitchens
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
campuses
to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
streets
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ear
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
eye
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
follows
Black
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
families
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
older
generations
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
navigating
British and American
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
today
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
From
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
front
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rooms
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
kitchens
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
campuses
to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
streets
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ear
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
eye
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
follows
Black
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
families
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
older
generations
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
navigating
British and American
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
From
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
front
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rooms
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
kitchens
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
campuses
to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
streets
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ear
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
eye
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
follows
Black
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
families
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
older
generations
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
navigating
British and American
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
today
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
From
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
front
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rooms
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
kitchens
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
campuses
to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
streets
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ear
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
eye
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
follows
Black
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
families
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
older
generations
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
navigating
British and American
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
today
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
From
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
front
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rooms
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
kitchens
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
campuses
to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
streets
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ear
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
eye
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
follows
Black
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
families
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
older
generations
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
navigating
British and American
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
From
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
front
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rooms
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
kitchens
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
campuses
to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
streets
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ear
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
eye
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
follows
Black
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
families
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
friends
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
older
generations
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
navigating
British and American
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
today
.
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IELTS essay Help me i don't know what to do

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
234 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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