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In recent years, it is often observe that the proportion of people who decided to go to the university is rapidly increase. There is much debate around whether university purpose is only to support students to land a decent job after graduated or it also plays a crucial role in life than expected. Personally speaking, I am of the opinion that being prepared in university will bring various advantages for learners. On the one hand of the argument, it is undeniable that achieving excellent certificates during school time will help students to impress the employers while applying for a job. The importance of each diploma degree can show how assiduous and perseverance the candidate is, there by giving higher opportunities for that employee. In addition, further education can sometimes be considered as unfordable for some people, explained why most would not undertaking themselves in higher study if it would not because a secure and a higher living standard in future life. On the other hand of the argument, there are a plethora of people who claim that going to the university not only help graduates to get a better career but also bring far more benefits. First and foremost, university life and be deemed as a small society due to the fact that there are lots of people comes from all over the world. This would generate numerous opportunities for students to communicate, work and expand their social circles. Furthermore, socioeconomics will gain thanks to the contribution which devoted by the students. As a result, their maturity and confidence will grow, enabling them to live a live with fulfillments and happiness. In conclusion, there are plentiful arguments on university education goal is only to carve out a successful career, but some other benefits can also be mentioned. I strongly believe that every individuals should be encouraged to express themselves and enrich their knowledge while studying in university
In recent years, it is
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often
observe that the proportion of
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people
who decided to go to the
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university
is
rapidly
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increase
. There is much debate around whether
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university
purpose is
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only
to support students to land a decent job after graduated or it
also
plays a crucial role in life than
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expected
.
Personally
speaking, I am of the opinion that
being prepared
in
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university
will bring various advantages for learners.

On the one hand of the argument, it is undeniable that achieving excellent certificates during school time will
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help
students to impress the employers while applying for a job. The importance of each diploma degree can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
how assiduous and perseverance the candidate is, there by giving higher opportunities for that employee.
In addition
,
further
education can
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sometimes
be considered
as
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unfordable
for
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some
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people
,
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explained
why most would not
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undertaking
themselves in higher study if it would not
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because
a secure and a higher living standard in future life.

On the other hand
of the argument, there are a plethora of
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people
who claim that going to the
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university
not
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only
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help
graduates to
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get
a better career
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but
also
bring far more benefits.
First
and foremost,
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university
life and
be deemed
as a
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small
society due to the fact that there are lots of
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people
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comes
from all over the world. This would generate numerous opportunities for students to communicate, work and expand their social circles.
Furthermore
,
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socioeconomics
will gain thanks to the contribution which devoted by the students.

As a result
, their maturity and confidence will grow, enabling them to
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live
a
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live
with
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fulfillments
and happiness.

In conclusion
, there are plentiful arguments on
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university
education goal is
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only
to carve out a successful career,
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but
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some
other benefits can
also
be mentioned
. I
strongly
believe that every
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individuals
should
be encouraged
to express themselves and enrich their knowledge while studying in
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university
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IELTS essay hello my name is heheh I like you

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
316 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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