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Healthcare should be founded by government do agree or disagree?

Healthcare should be founded by government do agree or disagree? 85GeG
In current society, governments accept the responsibility to furnish all people with healthcare services. However, the issue of payment is still controversial, and some people argue that such measures should be free. Personally, I would agree with this idea, but I also believe that everybody should be responsible for his own health condition. On the one hand, good healthcare should be available to everyone for free. State healthcare should be paid by the government using money from taxes, since an extremely effective tax system has been adopted to levy, for instance, income tax and other taxes on community residents, they expect the government to create funds for a wide range of health services. Nevertheless, everyone has access to the same quality of care and treatment. Since the exorbitant cost of modern medicines and services can be prohibitive in less affluent families without adequate subsidies from health facilities, they can be significantly affected by devastating disruptions.
In
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current
society,
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governments
accept the responsibility to furnish all
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people
with healthcare services.
However
, the issue of payment is
still
controversial, and
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some
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people
argue that such measures should be free.
Personally
, I would
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agree
with this
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idea
,
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but
I
also
believe that everybody should be responsible for his
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own
health condition.

On the one hand,
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good
healthcare should be available to everyone for free. State healthcare should
be paid
by the
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government
using money from
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taxes
, since an
extremely
effective
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tax
system has
been adopted
to levy,
for instance
, income
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
tax
and other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
taxes
on community residents, they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
to create funds for a wide range of health services.
Nevertheless
, everyone has access to the same quality of care and treatment. Since the exorbitant cost of modern medicines and services can be prohibitive in less affluent families without adequate subsidies from health facilities, they can be
significantly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
affected
by devastating disruptions.
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IELTS essay Healthcare should be founded by government do agree or disagree?

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