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Health care should not be provided for free regardless of a person’s income. The health of a person is in their own hands and they should, therefore, be held accountable for that. Do you agree with this statement?

Health care should not be provided for free regardless of a person’s income. The health of a person is in their own hands and they should, therefore, be held accountable for that. 15LRW
No, I believe that the government or the hospitals should provide free of cost service atleast for the general check up and with a very minimum fee on diagnosis, based on the individuals earning. There are people below poverty who cannot even meet their minimum needs. As technology is increasing the medical expenses are also increasing to treat different diseases. A common man may not spend money on the expenses ignoring the health. This may inturn increase the death rate effecting the country's harmony. Every country should consider the people in the below poverty line and make sure that they meet their helath needs with no cost. In this way the fear of cost gets reduced and people get diagonised immediately not waiting until something is critical.
No, I believe that the
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government
or the hospitals should provide free of cost service
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atleast
for the general
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check
up and with a
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very
minimum fee on diagnosis, based on the individuals earning.

There are
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people
below poverty who cannot even
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meet
their minimum needs.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
technology is increasing the medical expenses are
also
increasing to treat
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different
diseases. A common
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man
may not spend money on the expenses ignoring the health. This may
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inturn
increase the death rate effecting the country's harmony.

Every country should consider the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
in the below poverty line and
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make
sure that they
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meet
their
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helath
needs with no cost. In this way the fear of cost
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gets
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reduced
and
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people
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get
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diagonised
immediately not waiting until something is critical.

IELTS essay Health care should not be provided for free regardless of a person’s income. The health of a person is in their own hands and they should, therefore, be held accountable for that.

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