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Having year off before starting universities is becoming increasingly common. Do you think this is a positive or negative trend?

Having year off before starting universities is becoming increasingly common. Do you think this is a positive or negative trend? 0ArpO
Nowadays, university students are holding an annual year off prior to the beginning of their course, this is now, more and more fashionable every day. In my opinion, this is a positive impact on youth it added an advantage to gain knowledge and get supporting themselves financially. I shall examine the pros of this in the following paragraph. Firstly, the graduates having enough time to decide their upcoming courses which leads them to push their career. Most of the students suffered because of their wrong choices in the early days. This one year holidays will be more beneficial for current generation students having haddit of selecting courses. For example, My friend wants to do the IT course in her bachelor's degree, due to lack of information about the course and the selection process takes her a long period of time to take a decision on the course. As a result, she chose a different one. Secondly, they can use their free time on learning new things and also gain some knowledge like improving computer, communication skills, doing some socials works and also join as interns in workshops all these give a different set of learning experiences in their life. Moreover, doing some internships which improve their financial stability. For instances, A student chose to do a Mechanical Engineering course further, So, in this case, the gap between the course of the joining date will really give a good opportunity to get more knowledge as an intern also get profited from this. In conclusion, the students of this generation having enough time to choose their personal courses with a priority of the information on it. Therefore, the information of learning new things will help. As a result, they become financial well. I believe that it is a positive sign.
Nowadays, university
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are holding an annual year off prior to the beginning of their
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course
, this is
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positive
impact on youth it
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added
an advantage to gain knowledge and
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get
supporting themselves
financially
. I shall examine the pros of this in the following paragraph.

Firstly
, the graduates having
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enough
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time
to decide their upcoming
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courses
which leads them to push their career. Most of the
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students
suffered
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because
of their
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wrong
choices in the early days. This one year holidays will be more beneficial for
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current
generation
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students
having
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of selecting
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courses
.
For example
, My friend wants to do the IT
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course
in her bachelor's degree, due to lack of information about the
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course
and the selection process takes her a long period of
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time
to take a decision on the
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course
.
As a result
, she chose a
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different
one.

Secondly
, they can
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use
their free
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time
on learning new things and
also
gain
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some
knowledge like improving computer, communication
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skills
, doing
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some
socials works and
also
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join
as interns in workshops all these give a
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different
set of learning experiences in their life.
Moreover
, doing
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some
internships which
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improve
their financial stability. For instances, A
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student
chose to do a Mechanical Engineering
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course
further
,
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So
,
in this case
, the gap between the
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course
of the joining date will
really
give a
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good
opportunity to
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get
more knowledge as an intern
also
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get
profited from this.

In conclusion
, the
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students
of this generation having
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enough
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time
to choose their personal
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courses
with a priority of the information on it.
Therefore
, the information of learning new things will
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help
.
As a result
, they become financial well. I believe that it is a
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positive
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sign
.
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IELTS essay Having year off before starting universities is becoming increasingly common. Do you think this is a positive or negative trend?

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