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Some people think that women should not work in police worce

Some people think that women should not work in police worce m1MbA

It is true that women are not able to be policewoman. I am totally agree, that women can not work to the police worse because of their nonattention and especially sex. People are known that police is not woman’s profession. In other words, they have to choose another way for their near future and better life. It means that they have to think about their family. They will not continue their life unless they do that. Therefore, the importance thing is that they ought to do something, which helps for their family.

It is true that women are not able to be policewoman. I am totally
Consider using a past participle here: "agreed".agreed
agree
, that women can not work to the police worse This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of their Possible spelling mistake found.non attention
nonattention
 and especially
 sex.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
are known
 that police is not woman’s profession. In other words
, they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 choose another way for their near future and better life. It means that they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 about their family. They will not continue their life unless they do that. Therefore
, the importance thing is that they ought to do something, which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 for their family. 