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Smoking is on the increase among young people. What are the most serious problems associated with it and what solutions can you suggest?

Smoking is on the increase among young people. What are the most serious problems associated with it and what solutions can you suggest? PVAWB
The younger generation is seen as addicted to smoking and it is observed that smoking addiction is increasing a lot in the younger people. This essay provides deep knowledge of the problems linked with smoking and the measures to be taken to prevent it. There are many health issues that are caused due to smoking and smoking leads to cancer. It is one of the most serious concerns for smokers. In other words, smoking kills and the best illustration of this is that the people of the forthcoming are inviting health complication by smoking. Nowadays, there are many smokers but the youth is smoking a lot. If the countries future generation is addicted to such habits then the future of the country will be in danger. The countries future is also considered as one of the major dispute if the societies upcoming generation are addicted to smoking. So, to overcome these disasters, we can implement few protocols. One of the best measures is to ban smoking as this will help everyone to quit smoking either by will or by force which is caused by the implementation of governments regulation. Countries like Bhutan has implemented such law and they are seeing better results. The other solution is to stop promoting tobacco products. The best way to achieve it is there should not be any marketing or ad services for smoking. In addition, the media should never be using smoking products in their ventures. In this, way smoking can be controlled in the youth as well as in people of ages. To summarize, smoking causes a serious obstacle to every individual and there should be an amendment in the laws related to the usage of tobacco.
The younger generation is
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seen
as addicted to
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smoking
and it
is observed
that
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smoking
addiction is increasing a lot in the younger
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people
. This essay provides deep knowledge of the problems linked with
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smoking
and the measures to
be taken
to
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prevent
it.

There are
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many
health issues that
are caused
due to
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smoking
and
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smoking
leads to cancer. It is one of the most serious concerns for smokers.
In other words
,
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smoking
kills and the best illustration of this is that the
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people
of the forthcoming are inviting health complication by
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smoking
. Nowadays, there are
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many
smokers
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but
the youth is
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smoking
a lot. If the
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countries
future generation
is addicted
to such habits then the future of the
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country
will be in
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danger
. The
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countries
future is
also
considered as one of the major dispute if the societies upcoming generation
are addicted
to smoking.

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So
, to overcome these disasters, we can implement few protocols. One of the best measures is to ban
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smoking
as this will
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help
everyone to quit
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smoking
either by will or by force which
is caused
by the implementation of
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governments
regulation.
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Countries
like Bhutan has implemented such
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law and
they are seeing better results.

The other solution is to
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stop
promoting tobacco products. The best way to achieve it is there should not be any marketing or ad services for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
smoking
.
In addition
, the media should never be using
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
smoking
products in their ventures. In this, way
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smoking
can
be controlled
in the youth
as well
as in
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people
of ages.

To summarize
,
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smoking
causes a serious obstacle to every individual and there should be an amendment in the laws related to the usage of tobacco.
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IELTS essay Smoking is on the increase among young people. What are the most serious problems associated with it and what solutions can you suggest?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
284 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
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