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having information about history

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We have heard that most of the students when you ask questions about history they would say don’t have any information, but it is not true. Everyone knows history at least enough for themselves. As an example, think about waking up in the morning and not remembering anything, you don’t know who you are. So that you have to discover what is going on around you. According to this, it is essential to have knowledge about history because due to that we can anticipate the future’s events. Be aware that the future is not predictable but we can look forward to it and sometimes we need to prepare ourselves for it.
We have heard that most of the students when you ask questions about history they would say don’t have any information,
but
it is not true. Everyone knows history at least
enough
for themselves. As an example,
think
about waking up in the morning and not remembering anything, you don’t know who you are.
So that
you
have to
discover what is going on around you. According to this, it is essential to have knowledge about history
because
due to that we can anticipate the future’s
events
. Be aware that the future is not predictable
but
we can look forward to it and
sometimes
we need to prepare ourselves for it.
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IELTS essay having information about history

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
111 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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