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Have you recently bought a mobile phone? Write a review about the phone explaining why you bought it, how easy it is to use and if you would recommend it to others.

Have you recently bought a mobile phone? Write a review about the phone explaining why you bought it, how easy it is to use and if you would recommend it to others. 7a3d3
When I lost my old phone, I decided to get a new smart phone. The Iphone 11 pro was the one that caught my eye for a number of reasons. First of all, I consider this phone to be excellent value for money due to its high storage capacity, security functions and the quality of the camera. For me, the specs are as good as I would expect from much more expensive phones. Another reason is that it is small enough to carry in a pocket. I am not keen on the large screen phones. However, as far as I am concerned, the best thing about it is how easy it is to operate. Even if someone is fairly new with a phone, they would have no difficulty using it. Personally, I think that it suits my needs as I can check my emails, send text messages, listen to music and browse the Internet. All things considered, I believe that this phone is the best value phone on the market for its price. I would recommend it as it seems to be both user-friendly and affordable.
When I lost my
old
phone
, I decided to
get
a new smart
phone
. The
Iphone 11 pro
was the one that caught my eye for a number of reasons.

First of all
, I consider this
phone
to be excellent value for money due to its high storage capacity, security functions and the quality of the camera. For me, the specs are as
good
as I would
expect
from much more expensive
phones
. Another reason is that it is
small
enough
to carry in a pocket. I am not keen on the large screen phones.

However
, as far as I
am concerned
, the best thing about it is how easy it is to operate. Even if someone is
fairly
new with a
phone
, they would have no difficulty using it.

Personally
, I
think
that it suits my needs as I can
check
my emails,
send
text messages, listen to music and browse the Internet.

All things considered, I believe that this
phone
is the best value
phone
on the market for its price. I would recommend it as it seems to be both user-friendly and affordable.
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IELTS essay Have you recently bought a mobile phone? Write a review about the phone explaining why you bought it, how easy it is to use and if you would recommend it to others.

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186 words
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