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Have you, or has anyone you know, trained or prepared for something difficult? What preparations were needed? Where they successful?

Have you, or has anyone you know, trained or prepared for something difficult? What preparations were needed? Where they successful? peYny
In 2019, it was my third year at the faculty of economic sciences, I was studying management. First, I organized a meeting with my professor, she gave to me my subject of resarch, she asked me to do a scientific article of the research, and orgonized a sturcture of research, and find a problematic. I remembered that's what I did I returned to my home I demanded to my mom to buy me a book so as to help me in my research, I did my scientific article, I did my sturcture of research, and found a problematic. I met my professor again I gave to her my tasks she approved my job, she gave me the admission to begin my resarch unfortunately I didn't have a loptop at this time I must have to figure out to and find a solution, so I called my friend M'hamed, I met him at coffee shop we disscussed to each other, he told me that he had a exam of graduation he would a help so I proposed to him to help him in his research in front of this he gave me his loptop to do my research also, we agreed I helped him in his research and then I took his Laptop and I began my resarch he took me about 3 months to do it I tormented in this 3 months I did all my best so as to do my job very well that's what I did. The day of graduation is come I remember the day before the exam I didin't sleep just for minute so I prepared the whole day also the night i prepared for the presentation I remember I did all my best to success my presentation The day before the exam I didn't sleep I remember the night I was do my presentation at 8 am I dressed my clothes and go to the University I think I was very nervous and excited I had both of sensation I remember when my turn is come I went to the hall where we passed the exam my professor demand to me to did not present my presentation I was shocked because I did all my best I did all my efforts to do my presentation but I was shocked when she demand to me to did not do it she asked to me to gave her my research and she asked me some questions the most thing she shocked me is that the problematic of resarch was not what she approved she told me that the problematic is not good like she told she didn't approved of my problematic I was schocked I was very upset this day I return to my home very sad and I remmber I sleeped. After a month she gave to us our result she gave me the lowest rank in the class I was very sad because I did all my efforts to success and I felt very sad. To sum up this subject I will give some advices to the future students do your best keep going no matter what difficult you are faced with, don't give up and don't surrender even though the result is not good to you keep going and always do your best.
In 2019, it was my third year at the faculty of economic sciences, I was studying management.

First
, I organized a meeting with my professor, she
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gave
to me my subject of
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resarch
, she asked me to do a scientific article of the
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research
, and
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orgonized
a
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sturcture
of
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research
, and find a
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problematic
. I remembered that's what I did I returned to my home I demanded to my mom to
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buy
me a book
'So as to' expresses purpose and is used in formal texts. Consider using "to"
so as to
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help
me in my
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research
, I did my scientific article, I did my
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sturcture
of
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research
, and found a problematic.

I met my professor again I
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gave
to her my tasks she approved my job, she
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gave
me the admission to
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begin
my
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resarch
unfortunately I didn't have a
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loptop
at this time I
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must
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have to
figure out to and find a solution,
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so
I called my friend M'
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hamed
, I met him at coffee shop we
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disscussed
to each other, he
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told
me that he had
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a
exam of graduation he would a
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help
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so
I proposed to him to
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help
him in his
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research
in front of this he
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gave
me his
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loptop
to do my
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research
also
, we
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agreed
I
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helped
him in his
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research
and then I took his Laptop and I began my
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resarch
he took me about 3 months to do it I tormented in this 3 months I did all my
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best
'So as to' expresses purpose and is used in formal texts. Consider using "to"
so as to
do my job
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very
well that's what I did.

The day of graduation is
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come
I
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remember
the day
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before
the exam I
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didin't
sleep
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just
for minute
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so
I prepared the whole day
also
the night
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i
prepared for the
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presentation
I
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remember
I did all my
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best
to success my
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presentation
The day
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before
the exam I didn't sleep I
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remember
the night I was
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do
my
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presentation
at 8 am I dressed my clothes and go to the University I
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think
I was
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very
nervous and excited I had both of sensation I
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remember
when my turn is
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come
I went to the hall where we passed the exam my professor demand to me to did not present my
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presentation
I
was shocked
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because
I did all my
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best
I did all my efforts to do my
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presentation
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but
I
was shocked
when she
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demand
to me to did not do it she
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asked to
me to
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gave
her my
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research and
she asked me
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some
questions the most thing she shocked me is that the
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problematic
of
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resarch
was not what she approved she
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told
me that the
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problematic
is not
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good
like she
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told
she didn't
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approved
of my
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problematic
I was
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schocked
I was
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very
upset this day I return to my home
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sad and I
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remmber
I
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sleeped
. After a month she
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to us our result she
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gave
me the lowest rank in the
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class
I was
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very
sad
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because
I did all my efforts to success and I felt
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very
sad.

To sum up this subject I will give
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some
advices to the future students do your
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best
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keep
going no matter what difficult you
are faced
with, don't give up and don't surrender
even though
the result is not
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good
to you
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keep
going and always do your
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best
.
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IELTS essay Have you, or has anyone you know, trained or prepared for something difficult? What preparations were needed? Where they successful?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
550 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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