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have you had a really good journey?

have you had a really good journey? 30Qo5

I have had a really nice journey in Italy which was one of the most memorable and best trip in my life. I went there with my family and our friends and had a great time every day. We started our journey from Milan and then went to Verona, Venice, Florence, Rome, Vatican and also Sirmione. We had some accidents which made this journey even more memorable. It all started when we were on our way to Kutaisi airport and my family’s friend said that she didn’t have biometrical passport since she is American and it is necessary when traveling to Europe. Once we got it done for her it was only two hours left for our flight and we were still in Tbilisi, which almost made us miss the plane.

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started
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got
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only
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left
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IELTS essay have you had a really good journey?

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

131 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Lexical Resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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