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have you had a really good journey?

have you had a really good journey? 30Qo5
I have had a really nice journey in Italy which was one of the most memorable and best trip in my life. I went there with my family and our friends and had a great time every day. We started our journey from Milan and then went to Verona, Venice, Florence, Rome, Vatican and also Sirmione. We had some accidents which made this journey even more memorable. It all started when we were on our way to Kutaisi airport and my family’s friend said that she didn’t have biometrical passport since she is American and it is necessary when traveling to Europe. Once we got it done for her it was only two hours left for our flight and we were still in Tbilisi, which almost made us miss the plane.
I have had a
really
nice journey in Italy which was one of the most memorable and best trip in my life. I went there with my family and our friends and had a great time every day. We
started
our journey from Milan and then went to Verona, Venice, Florence, Rome, Vatican and
also
Sirmione
. We had
some
accidents which made this journey even more memorable. It all
started
when we were on our way to Kutaisi airport and my family’s friend said that she didn’t have
biometrical
passport since she is American and it is necessary when traveling to Europe. Once we
got
it done for her it was
only
two hours
left
for our
flight and
we were
still
in Tbilisi, which almost made us miss the
plane
.
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IELTS essay have you had a really good journey?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
131 words
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