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Have you ever tried Vietnamese noodles

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Have you ever tried Vietnamese noodles? Besides the captivating and enchanting landscapes, food culture is such a potential aspect that fascinates visitors' stomach. It is the tourist who is entirely amazed when they have a taste of Beef noodle soup and Guilin rice noodles. If you reckon both dishes are the same, you are wrong totally! This essay will show the differences between them in terms of ingredients, manner of eating and sense of taste. Both Vietnamese and Chinese have a unique way to cook dishes. Not only does Bunbo contain beef because it is basically unchanged ingredients, but it also has cubes of congealed pork blood, shrimp paste and pork in the same broth. In addition, a perfect meal is great in both terms of flavor and garnishing, so sliced banana flower is added at the top of the dish in order to be more eye-catching and tasty. In contrast, Guilin noodle rices themselves are made of rice flour, water, vegetable oil and complemented by equally important condiments including gravy, meet and toppings. Apart from the main dishes, they have a slide course also. Bunbo is usually eaten with herbs and raw vegetable as accompaniments because Vietnam is a tropical city, and raw vegetable contains many nutrients good for health. Another reason is that the taste and fragrance of each vegetable make the dishes more flavourful. Meanwhile, Guilin rice noodles is consumed with mince scallions together with a plate of cooked vegetables stir-fried in flavored cooking oils. The tastes between them are really different. Although Bunbo can be found in every corner of the nation as it goes through the ups and downs of Vietnam history, the cookery is popular and makes everyone love at the first taste as if the eaters were having a bowl of Bunbo in Hue-where that obviously came from. On the other hand, there is no standard recipe for this Guilin rice noodle, that is the reason why the taste extremely varies in every shop and makes it adventure of its own. On the positive side, you are freely able to eat on your way instead of following somebody's recipe. On the negative one, your sense of smell will not enjoy the food's aroma while your sense of taste would go away or change. In conclusion, although both Vietnamese and Chinese noodles are thoroughly different, the flavour of these two versions of noodles is really good. I hope you would get a chance to have yourselves experiences.
Have you ever tried Vietnamese
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noodles
?
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the captivating and enchanting landscapes, food culture is such a potential aspect that fascinates visitors' stomach. It is the tourist who is
entirely
amazed when they have a
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taste
of Beef
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noodle
soup and
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Guilin
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rice
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noodles
. If you reckon both
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dishes
are the same, you are
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wrong
totally
! This essay will
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show
the differences between them in terms of ingredients, manner of eating and sense of taste.

Both Vietnamese and Chinese have a unique way to cook
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dishes
. Not
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only
does
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Bunbo
contain beef
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because
it is
basically
unchanged ingredients,
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but
it
also
has cubes of congealed pork blood, shrimp paste and pork in the same broth.
In addition
, a perfect meal is great in both terms of flavor and garnishing,
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so
sliced banana flower is
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added
at the top of the
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dish
in order to be more eye-catching and tasty.
In contrast
,
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Guilin
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noodle
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rices
themselves
are made
of
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rice
flour, water,
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vegetable
oil and complemented by
equally
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important
condiments including gravy,
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meet
and toppings.

Apart from the main
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dishes
, they have a slide course
also
.
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Bunbo
is
usually
eaten with herbs and raw
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vegetable
as accompaniments
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because
Vietnam is a tropical city, and raw
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vegetable
contains
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many
nutrients
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good
for health. Another reason is that the
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taste
and fragrance of each
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vegetable
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make
the
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dishes
more
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flavourful
. Meanwhile,
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Guilin
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rice
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noodles
is consumed
with mince scallions together with a plate of cooked
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vegetables
stir-fried in flavored cooking oils.

The
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tastes
between them are
really
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different
. Although
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Bunbo
can
be found
in every corner of the nation as it goes through the ups and downs of Vietnam history, the cookery is popular and
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makes
everyone
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love
at the
first
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taste
as if the eaters were having a bowl of
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Bunbo
in Hue-where that
obviously
came from.
On the other hand
, there is no standard recipe for this
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Guilin
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rice
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noodle
,
that is
the reason why the
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taste
extremely
varies in every shop and
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makes
it adventure of its
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own
. On the
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positive
side, you are
freely
able to eat on your way
instead
of following somebody's recipe.
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On
the
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negative
one, your sense of smell will not enjoy the food's aroma while your sense of
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taste
would go away or
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change
.

In conclusion
, although both Vietnamese and Chinese
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noodles
are
thoroughly
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different
, the
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flavour
of these two versions of
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noodles
is
really
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good
. I hope you would
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get
a chance to have yourselves experiences.
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IELTS essay Have you ever tried Vietnamese noodles

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413 words
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