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In 100-120 words, write a paragraph about your favorite weather.

In 100-120 words, write a paragraph about your favorite weather. B75N6
For some reason, from childhood, those cold days in the winter always give me a couple of indescribable feelings. Specifically, these days would be about 15 degrees Celsius to 17 degrees Celsius. With this kind of temperature, it's highly likely that you might catch a cold if you don't keep warm properly. There are several reasons why I love kind of this weather. For one thing, it's due to my natural high body temperature, and thus I prefer cold weather to sweltering and stuffy summertime that makes me sweaty all the time. For another one, it is my passion for being arrayed to look smart in all items of my wardrobe. It would be so warm and pleasant when people dress in layers on such a chilly winter day. Just a thought of it already makes me excited. For the last reason, the cold invokes me about the Tet special atmosphere in the past. Back in the day, to my way of thinking, Tet owned the ambiance of a traditional holiday that the modern does not. Currently, I'm still living in my hometown, and the remaining of late summer here is gradually gone with cool breezes. Therefore, I think very soon I will be enjoyed the atmosphere one more time.
For
some
reason, from childhood, those
cold
days in the winter always give me a couple of indescribable feelings.
Specifically
, these days would be about 15 degrees Celsius to 17 degrees Celsius. With this kind of temperature, it's
highly
likely that you might catch a
cold
if you don't
keep
warm
properly
. There are several reasons why I
love
kind of this weather. For one thing, it's due to my natural high body temperature, and
thus
I prefer
cold
weather to sweltering and stuffy
summertime
that
makes
me sweaty all the time. For another one, it is my passion for
being arrayed
to look smart in all items of my wardrobe. It would be
so
warm and pleasant when
people
dress in layers on such a chilly winter day.
Just
a
thought
of it already
makes
me excited. For the last reason, the
cold
invokes me about the Tet special atmosphere in the past. Back in the day, to my way of thinking, Tet
owned
the ambiance of a traditional holiday that the modern does not.
Currently
, I'm
still
living in my hometown, and the remaining of late summer here is
gradually
gone with
cool breezes.
Therefore
, I
think
very
soon
I will
be enjoyed
the atmosphere one more time.
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IELTS essay In 100-120 words, write a paragraph about your favorite weather.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
210 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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