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coronavirus and vaccination in the world

coronavirus and vaccination in the world Yw10j
first, vaccination is the most and best important way to protect people from coronavirus (covid-19). Before vaccination, a lot of people in the whole of the world died because scientists can not find any vaccines for this pandemic disease. So when investigators discover the vaccine and produce it in very high quantities. Russia, China, The united states are three countries to produce and distribute the vaccine to other countries.
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first
, vaccination is the most and best
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important
way to protect
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people
from coronavirus (
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid-19
).
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Before
vaccination,
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a lot of
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people
in the whole of the world
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died
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because
scientists can not find any vaccines for this pandemic disease.
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So
when investigators discover the vaccine and produce it in
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very
high quantities. Russia, China, The
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united states
are three countries to produce and distribute the vaccine to other countries.

IELTS essay coronavirus and vaccination in the world

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69 words
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