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coronavirus and vaccination in the world

coronavirus and vaccination in the world Yw10j

first, vaccination is the most and best important way to protect people from coronavirus (covid-19). Before vaccination, a lot of people in the whole of the world died because scientists can not find any vaccines for this pandemic disease. So when investigators discover the vaccine and produce it in very high quantities. Russia, China, The united states are three countries to produce and distribute the vaccine to other countries.

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 way to protect This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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