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Have teenagers lost their moral values

Have teenagers lost their moral values El6lQ

I would strongly agree with the fact that nowadays a lot of teenagers commit immoral crimes or engage in activities that are destructive. The major reasons for this attitude may be social media and violent scenes in movies. First and foremost, a plethora of teenagers, young adults or even preteens are exposed to social media which can be beneficial if used effectively at the same time it can be exploiting if used in a wrong manner. In conclusion, effective use of social media and movies can be beneficial for teenagers and can encourage them to exhibit moral values.

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