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Public transport is cost effective and curbs pollution.What do you prefer?

Public transport is cost effective and curbs pollution. What do you prefer? KnqG0
I do agree with the fact that public transport is cost effective and helps in controlling environmental pollution but, it has its own disadvantages like it consumes a lot of time and it is difficult to travel in one because of crowd etc. So personally I would prefer a private transport facility like car or a motorbike which helps me be on time to work or classes. Cars or bikes also can be used at any time of the day especially during night time whereas it is not advisable for people to commute by bus or trains at night. In conclusion, I would prefer public transport whenever possible but at other times I prefer cars or cycles.
I do
agree with the fact that
public transport
is cost
effective and
helps
in controlling environmental pollution
but
, it has its
own
disadvantages like it consumes
a lot of
time
and it is difficult to travel in one
because
of crowd etc.
So
personally
I would prefer a private transport facility like car or a motorbike which
helps
me be on
time
to work or classes. Cars or bikes
also
can be
used
at any
time
of the day
especially
during night
time
whereas it is not advisable for
people
to commute by bus or trains at night.
In conclusion
, I would prefer public transport whenever possible
but
at other
times
I prefer cars or cycles.
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IELTS essay Public transport is cost effective and curbs pollution. What do you prefer?

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