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Public transport is cost effective and curbs pollution.What do you prefer?

Public transport is cost effective and curbs pollution. What do you prefer? KnqG0

I do agree with the fact that public transport is cost effective and helps in controlling environmental pollution but, it has its own disadvantages like it consumes a lot of time and it is difficult to travel in one because of crowd etc. So personally I would prefer a private transport facility like car or a motorbike which helps me be on time to work or classes. Cars or bikes also can be used at any time of the day especially during night time whereas it is not advisable for people to commute by bus or trains at night. In conclusion, I would prefer public transport whenever possible but at other times I prefer cars or cycles.

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 during night You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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