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Describe the neighborhood you live

Describe the neighborhood you live 53NAD
Currently I reside in my parent’s home which is pretty close to where I work. Our home is in the middle of the city but is quite far from the main road where the vehicles usually commute, so we don’t hear a lot of traffic noises and as a result our neighborhood is calm and pleasant. There is a small lake behind my house. In fact it only takes us five minutes to get there and the calming is visible from my room which makes my neighborhood even more special and serene. In conclusion, I love my neighborhood as it is free from mechanical noises and additionally I have wonderful neighbors.
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Currently
I reside in my parent’s home which is pretty close to where I work. Our home is in the middle of the city
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but
is quite far from the main road where the vehicles
usually
commute,
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so
we don’t hear
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a lot of
traffic noises and
as a result
our neighborhood is calm and pleasant. There is a
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small
lake behind my
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house
. In
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fact it
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only
takes us five minutes to
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get
there and the calming is visible from my room which
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makes
my neighborhood even more special and serene.
In conclusion
, I
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love
my neighborhood as it is free from mechanical noises and
additionally
I have wonderful neighbors.

IELTS essay Describe the neighborhood you live

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
111 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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