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Describe the house which you live

Describe the house which you live mWD28

Currently, I reside in my parent’s home which I pretty close to where I work. Our home is not humongous but has all basic amenities a group of four will need. Our home is located in the middle of the city but is quite far from the main road where the vehicles frequently commute so, my place a bit calm and serene which I love. In conclusion, as people say Home is where the heart is, though we don’t have a home which is luxurious we are satisfied and happy with the house we own.

Currently
, I reside in my parent’s home which I pretty close to where I work. Our home is not humongous This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 has all basic amenities a group of four will need. Our home is located
 in the middle of the city This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 is quite far from the main road where the vehicles frequently
 commute This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, my place a bit calm and serene which I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
. In conclusion
, as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 say Home is where the heart is, though we don’t have a home which is luxurious we are satisfied
 and happy with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
. 

IELTS essay Describe the house which you live

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

95 words

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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

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Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
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Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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