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Have a romantic relationship

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Having a relationship while studying can be detrimental to students when the students are unable to handle their own studies. To begin with, if students can not manage and balance their time that would benefit their academics, they will have some problems with their studies, especially if they gain lower grades. Those troubles then make their parents worried and disappointed. Secondly, students will spend more time on their romantic relationships, which means they have less time to concentrate on their studies. It will adversely affect their lives and future. To conclude, engaging in a relationship will have some drawbacks if we can not keep things on track, instead of falling in love without proper preparation, it is better to focus on studying.
Having a relationship while studying can be detrimental to
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when the
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are unable to handle their
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studies. To
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with, if
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students
can not manage and balance their time that would benefit their academics, they will have
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some
problems with their studies,
especially
if they gain lower grades. Those troubles then
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make
their parents worried and disappointed.
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,
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students
will spend more time on their romantic relationships, which means they have less time to concentrate on their studies. It will
adversely
affect their
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lives
and future.
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some
drawbacks if we can not
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keep
things on
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track
,
instead
of falling in
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love
without proper preparation, it is better to focus on studying.

IELTS essay Have a romantic relationship

Essay
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1 paragraphs
122 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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