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Each year the prices of petrol increase all over the world.What kind of Impact does this have on traffic and environmental pollution.what else do you think the petrol price influence

Each year the prices of petrol increase all over the world. What kind of Impact does this have on traffic and environmental pollution. what else do you think the petrol price influence RRgPY
It is undoubetedly fact that petrol play a fundamental role in the industry. However, every year petrol prices increase than ever before. This essay will explain how rising petrol prices influence traffic, environmental pollution and other issue. Firstly, traffic has dramatic increased and it cannot be controlled by anyone. beacuse people mostly try to travel in own vehicle. however petrol has increased therefore people are inclined to use public transport. for example the sri lankan government increased the petrol prices continusely. however, traffic is not reduced. because there has significantly increase the number of vehicle. As consequence petrol price has increased not a good solution of reduce the traffic. Secondly, increase the petrol price cannot eradicate the environmental pollution. because this is not main point to reduce this. for instance the china researched the what are the main causes to this happen. they found traffic is not a major causes due to this reason. prices of petrol rose not good solution for reduct to environmental pollution. Another impact is that the prices of petrol can lead to rise in goods prices. because if government increase the petrol prices it will be causes to goods. most notable example Italy increased the petrol prices as the results of that goods prices was rose suddenly. due to that exaplain increase petrol prices is not good solution. In conclusion it is clear that petrol prices has been increased not good solution. It is not mainly causes to traffic and environmental polluton. Therefore government and individual have a responsibility to protect environment. government should take the another solution. Therefore government mitigate this problems.
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undoubetedly
fact that
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petrol
play a fundamental role in the industry.
However
, every year
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petrol
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prices
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increase
than ever
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before
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explain
how rising
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prices
influence
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traffic
,
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environmental
pollution and other issue.

Firstly
,
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traffic
has dramatic
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increased
and it cannot
be controlled
by anyone.
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beacuse
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people
mostly
try to travel in
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own
vehicle.
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however
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has
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increased
therefore
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people
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use
public transport.
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for
example the
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sri
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lankan
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government
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increased
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prices
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continusely
.
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however
,
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traffic
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reduced
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because
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significantly
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increase
the number of vehicle.
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price
has
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increased
not a
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good
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solution
of
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reduce
the traffic.

Secondly
,
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increase
the
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price
cannot eradicate the
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environmental
pollution.
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because
this is not main point to
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reduce
this.
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for
instance the china researched the what are the main
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causes
to this happen.
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they
found
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traffic
is not a major
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causes
due to this reason.
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prices
of
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rose not
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good
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solution
for
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reduct
to
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environmental
pollution.

Another impact is that the
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of
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can lead to rise in
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goods
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prices
.
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because
if
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the
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it will be
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most
notable example Italy
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as the results of that
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goods
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prices
was rose
suddenly
.
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due
to that
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exaplain
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is not
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. It is not
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environmental
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polluton
.
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and individual have a responsibility to protect environment.
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should take the another
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solution
.
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mitigate
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IELTS essay Each year the prices of petrol increase all over the world. What kind of Impact does this have on traffic and environmental pollution. what else do you think the petrol price influence

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