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There are more desirable goals rather than a successful career to attain in our life.

There are more desirable goals rather than a successful career to attain in our life. Bwe1d

(5) There are more desirable goals rather than a successful career to attain in our life. (6) One of the primary reasons for working people not to do enough or any exercise is the abysmal working condition. (7) For instance, employers have constant deadlines and tough targets at their offices. (8) To achieve them, they have to work for long hours each day. (9) It drains their stamina, and as a consequence, they do not want to do any exercise even when they are at home. (10) In addition, dependency on technology has fueled up the condition

(5) There are more desirable

goals rather
 than a successful career to attain in our life. (6) One of the primary reasons for working

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 not to do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 or any exercise is the abysmal working condition. (7) For instance
, employers have constant deadlines and tough targets at their offices. (8) To achieve them, they have

to work for long hours each day. (9) It drains their stamina, and as a consequence, they do not want

to do any exercise even when they are at home. (10) In addition
, dependency on technology has

fueled up the condition