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There is no denying that the world has been exponentially developed and the advent of digital technology has revolutionized the world in ways beyond the understanding of the common man. Starting from the tools of communication to the food we eat-digitalization has set up its stronghold in every field of life. However, what's alarming is the undeniable influence of technology on the next generation. Children and adolescents are blindly driven by gadgets and have subconsciously become a puppet of multinational corporations. Just a single beep of notification from the phone can

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IELTS essay harmful effects of digital technology

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

90 words

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