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The important things I learned at school

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In that day I was going to school with my mother when I was 5 years. I learned the most important things at school. I learned one of the important things was counting to milion in english and learning by heart. All of them I learned at school in 2014. In school our teachers were undue powerful and experienced. In conclusion the most important things we learned by teacher I think because I don't know the most important.
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IELTS essay The important things I learned at school

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
78 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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