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Hard work is better than smart work. Give your opinion on this.

Hard work is better than smart work. Give your opinion on this. RRLrk
From the moment a person begins to understand what is going on around them, they begin to do everything possible to achieve it, sacrificing time, energy and the like. This is why a person begins to believe that things can only happen because they are so obsessed with it. This is all wrong when a man starts to work hard, his health deteriorates, so it is only what is important in his daily routine and has a negative impact on his metabolism. It is worth noting that all the work with expert skills will produce useful results, and the work is far from it. It is believed that a person begins to complain about everything in life, because everything is difficult. Using your skills in the right way at the right time can have two consequences, instead of a hard day's work. The world around us is neither ancient nor modern. It is changing rapidly and we want to be who we are. When people understand the importance of skills, hard work becomes a great profession. Despite the fact that the job is best done in a minimum of time. It's easy to get something with great performance and real capacity, which is an invaluable feeling.
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to understand what is going on around them, they
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to do everything possible to achieve it, sacrificing time, energy and the like. This is why a person
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begins
to believe that things can
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obsessed with it.

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, his health deteriorates,
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it is
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what is
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in his daily routine and has a
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impact on his metabolism.

It is worth noting that all the
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work
with expert
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skills
will produce useful results, and the
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work
is far from it. It
is believed
that a person
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begins
to complain about everything in life,
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because
everything is difficult. Using your
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skills
in the right way at the right time can have two consequences,
instead
of a
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hard
day's work.

The world around us is neither ancient nor modern. It is changing
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rapidly and
we want to be who we are. When
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people
understand the importance of
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skills
,
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hard
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work
becomes a great profession. Despite the fact that the job is best done in a minimum of time. It's easy to
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get
something with great performance and real capacity, which is an invaluable feeling.
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IELTS essay Hard work is better than smart work. Give your opinion on this.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
206 words
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