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Happy Birthday my love. express your feeling for your love. Write a short paragraph showing your love for your love

Happy Birthday my love. express your feeling for your love. Write a short paragraph showing your love for your love NlVwb

I am writing this special note for a special person to wish him a very happy birthday on his special day. I know the pain you are going through, but forgetting those pains and moving forward in life, look for a beautiful tomorrow. I know that God has brought a lot of pain in your life and till now you are suffering but I know that the day will come when He will take away all the pain from your life. There will be a new sunrise in your life with lots of happiness and you will be indebted for the prosperous life ahead of you. I wish you to turn all your pain into a nightmare and start a new journey moving ahead in life with a raised head and a beautiful smile on your face. Once again I wish you a wonderful birthday just like you. happy birthday my love.

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very
 happy birthday on his special day. I know the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrampfeverburnsicknesssorenessagony
pain
 you are going through, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 forgetting those You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrampfeverburnsicknesssorenessagony
pains
 and moving forward in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
, look for a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 tomorrow. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 know that God has brought This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
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pain
 in your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 and till This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 you are suffering This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I know that the day will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 when He will take away all the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrampfeverburnsicknesssorenessagony
pain
 from your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
. There will be a new sunrise in your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 with lots of happiness and you will be indebted
 for the prosperous You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 ahead of you. I wish you to turn all your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrampfeverburnsicknesssorenessagony
pain
 into a nightmare and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 a new journey moving ahead in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 with a raised head and a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 smile on your face. “Once” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Once
 again I wish you a wonderful birthday This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 like you. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHappy
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 birthday my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
. 