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Happy Birthday my love. express your feeling for your love. Write a short paragraph showing your love for your love

Happy Birthday my love. express your feeling for your love. Write a short paragraph showing your love for your love NlVwb
I am writing this special note for a special person to wish him a very happy birthday on his special day. I know the pain you are going through, but forgetting those pains and moving forward in life, look for a beautiful tomorrow. I know that God has brought a lot of pain in your life and till now you are suffering but I know that the day will come when He will take away all the pain from your life. There will be a new sunrise in your life with lots of happiness and you will be indebted for the prosperous life ahead of you. I wish you to turn all your pain into a nightmare and start a new journey moving ahead in life with a raised head and a beautiful smile on your face. Once again I wish you a wonderful birthday just like you. happy birthday my love.
I am writing this special note for a special person to wish him a
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happy birthday on his special day. I know the
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pain
you are going through,
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forgetting those
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pains
and moving forward in
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life
, look for a
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beautiful
tomorrow.
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I
know that God has brought
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a lot of
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pain
in your
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life
and till
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now
you are suffering
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but
I know that the day will
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come
when He will take away all the
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pain
from your
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life
. There will be a new sunrise in your
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life
with lots of happiness and you will
be indebted
for the prosperous
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life
ahead of you. I wish you to turn all your
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pain
into a nightmare and
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start
a new journey moving ahead in
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life
with a raised head and a
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beautiful
smile on your face.
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Once
again I wish you a wonderful birthday
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like you.
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birthday my
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IELTS essay Happy Birthday my love. express your feeling for your love. Write a short paragraph showing your love for your love

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
152 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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