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Happiness is considered very important in life

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There is no denying the fact that happiness is considered very important for the survival. As it plays the important role in survival of satisfactory life, happiness is actually the state of mind which is felt by humans to express there feelings. Happiness cannot be defined exactly because it can’t be express in words as it is a feelings of person state of mind or the person doing their activities according to their likes and preferences. Happiness cannot be achieve easily as many factors effects, consequently people should be living their life by positive attitude, thinking and a satisfactory life to be happier. Surroundings also play significant role in achieving happiness, if a person is living along with the negative society of a group of people from which your vibes are not matching then happiness can’t be achieve. People usually like person who is happy and make the others happiness and make the others happier. As happiness attracts the people towards the person spreading happiness to the surroundings. Happiness represents the persons internal feeling as it reflects the positive actions of the body. Happiness is very important to live a long healthy life. People usually don’t have any body related disease but if he is not happy from inside or his mind is not happy then also diseases can affect the personal living. For instance, A boy aged 24 he was having each and everything which is required to live a lavish life but he don’t have the perfect surroundings or a group of people with a positive vibes or great thoughts, they were Just using him in monetary terms. Consequently, in Above mentioned example boy was having very lavish life with a missing of happiness in his life, I must say everything was waste if is suffering from depression as there is a lack of happiness a normal human body requires to survive a healthy life. Happiness is the best makeup.
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happiness
is considered
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very
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important
for the survival. As it plays the
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important
role in survival of satisfactory
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life
,
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happiness
is actually the state of mind which
is felt
by humans to express
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there
feelings.
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Happiness
cannot
be defined
exactly
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because
it can’t be express in words as it is
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a feelings
of
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person
state of mind or the
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person
doing their activities according to their likes and preferences.
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Happiness
cannot be
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achieve
easily
as
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many
factors effects,
consequently
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people
should be living their
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life
by
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positive
attitude, thinking and a satisfactory
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life
to be happier. Surroundings
also
play significant role in achieving
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happiness
, if a
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person
is living along with the
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negative
society of a group of
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people
from which your vibes are not matching then
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happiness
can’t be
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achieve
.

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People
usually
like
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person
who is happy and
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make
the others
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happiness
and
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make
the others happier.
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As
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happiness
attracts the
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people
towards the
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person
spreading
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happiness
to the surroundings.

Happiness represents the
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persons
internal feeling as it reflects the
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positive
actions of the body.
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Happiness
is
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very
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important
to
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live
a long healthy
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life
.
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People
usually
don’t have
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any body
related disease
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but
if he is not happy from inside or his mind is not happy then
also
diseases can affect the personal living.

For instance
, A boy aged 24 he was having each and everything which
is required
to
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live
a lavish
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life
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but
he
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don’t
have the perfect surroundings or a group of
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people
with a
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positive
vibes or great thoughts, they were
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Just
using him in monetary terms.

Consequently
, in Above mentioned example boy was having
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very
lavish
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life
with a missing of
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happiness
in his
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life
, I
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must
say everything was waste if is suffering from depression as there is a lack of
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happiness
a normal human body requires to survive a healthy life.

Happiness is the best makeup.
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IELTS essay Happiness is considered very important in life

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
322 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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