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HAND-WRITEN LETTER IS DISAPPEARED

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In recent years, writing letters by hand is less and less has become a broad issue to the general public. Although noticeable, the impact of this issue has not been realized by many residents. Discussed below are several causes of this issue. First and foremost, people should recognize that there are several main reasons supporting the idea that handwritten letters is reduced. A very important point to consider is that social network increase extremely. This means that people can contact each other by social network such as Facebook, Zalo, Yahoo, … all of them would drive handwritten letters is not popular as before. To illustrate this point, I would like to mention that my close friends and I always talk each other easily every night although they live in Hanoi and I live in Can Tho city. Another point I would like to make is that The telephone is one form of communication that almost everyone uses to speak with friends, family, and business associates. This is because of the fact that information travels faster today than ever before, people use the smart phone over letter writing. With the smart phone it is possible to transfer ideas and feelings quicker and receive a response to them faster than if a letter was written to that person. For example, people also do not always have time to write a letter, and so it is easier to pick up the mobile phone and call the person who they need to communicate with. A mobile phone can be used from anywhere at anytime. A letter can not be written at anytime, and especially when a reply is needed right away. To conclusion, the above mentioned facts have outlined the reasons of this issue. People should have further consideration on this issue.
In recent years, writing
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letters
by hand is less and less has become a broad
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issue
to the
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general public
. Although noticeable, the impact of this
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issue
has not
been realized
by
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many
residents. Discussed below are several causes of this issue.

First
and foremost,
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people
should recognize that there are several main reasons supporting the
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idea
that handwritten
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letters
is
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reduced
. A
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very
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important
point to consider is that social network increase
extremely
. This means that
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people
can contact each other by social network such as Facebook,
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Zalo
, Yahoo, … all of them would drive handwritten
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letters
is not popular as
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before
. To illustrate this point, I would like to mention that my close friends and I always talk each other
easily
every night although they
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live
in Hanoi and I
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live
in Can Tho city.

Another point I would like to
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make
is that The telephone is one form of communication that almost everyone
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uses
to speak with friends, family, and business associates. This is
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because of the fact that
information travels faster
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today
than ever
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before
,
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people
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use
the smart
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phone
over
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letter
writing. With the smart
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phone
it is possible to transfer
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
and feelings quicker and receive a response to them faster than if a
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letter
was written
to that person.
For example
,
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people
also
do not always have time to write a
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letter
, and
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so
it is easier to pick up the mobile
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phone
and call the person who they need to communicate with. A mobile
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phone
can be
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used
from anywhere at anytime. A
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letter
can not
be written
at anytime, and
especially
when a reply
is needed
right away.

To conclusion, the above mentioned facts have outlined the reasons of this
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issue
.
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People
should have
further
consideration on this
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issue
.
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IELTS essay HAND-WRITEN LETTER IS DISAPPEARED

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
298 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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