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halloween and christmas comparison

halloween and christmas comparison amKP
Halloween vs Christmas In Hallowen is a celebration to remind people who died, usually people wear some customes and go out to ask for candies, most of them are kids. In other hand in Christmas people don’t eat a lot of candies. In hallowen people eat more candies than in Christmas. Christmas is a date to celebrate the jesus birthday, for some people has a special mean. People use to have a colorfull tree con with differents lights, decorations, etc. . From December 16 to December 24, people use to have a meetings in houses of friends or family to pray and share some snacks with their guests. Christmas is a celebrating longer than Halloween. Christmas and Hallowen impacted my life in many ways, I remembered when I went out with my friend to sing tricky tricky hallowen, or going somewhere with my family and I wearing a custom. As I remeberd I was happier in Christmas than Halloween because I shared to much time with my family and plus I received many gifts for all my family.
Halloween vs Christmas

In
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Hallowen
is a celebration to remind
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people
who
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died
,
usually
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people
wear
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some
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customes
and go out to
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ask for
candies, most of them are kids. In other hand in Christmas
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people
don’t eat
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a lot of
candies.
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In
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hallowen
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people
eat more candies than in Christmas.

Christmas is a date to celebrate the
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jesus
birthday, for
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some
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people
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has
a special mean.
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People
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use to
have a
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colorfull
tree con with
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differents lights
, decorations, etc.
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.
From December 16 to December 24,
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people
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use to
have a meetings in
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houses
of friends or
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family
to pray and share
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some
snacks with their guests. Christmas is a celebrating longer than Halloween.

Christmas and
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Hallowen
impacted my life in
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many
ways, I remembered when I went out with my friend to sing
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tricky tricky
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hallowen
, or going somewhere with my
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family
and
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I wearing
a custom. As I
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remeberd
I was happier in Christmas than Halloween
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because
I shared
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to
much time with my
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family
and plus I received
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many
gifts for all my
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family
.

IELTS essay halloween and christmas comparison

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
178 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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