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Write about NELSON MANDELA

Write about NELSON MANDELA pV30

Nelson was a black man from south Africa. He had a good education. He moved to Johannesburg in south Africa in 1941. He joined the African Congress the oldest black political organization in south Africa. In 1955 ANC and other organizations call all different races to work together for their freedom. Nelson worked with them too. In 1962 Nelson captured from the government and they sent him to isolated island to stay their for rest of his life. While he was in the jail, his wife continued to call for freedom with black people. After that he got out from the prison because they didn't found any evidence proved that he was guilty. After that he worked hard to achieve his goal. He Participated in the election and he became the first black president in south Africa in 1994. He established more than two organizations in different majors to help people.

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man
 from Capitalize specific, well-defined geographical regions: "South Africa"South Africa
south Africa
. He had a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 education. He This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to Johannesburg in Capitalize specific, well-defined geographical regions: "South Africa"South Africa
south Africa
 in 1941. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
He
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joined
 the African Congress the oldest black political organization in Capitalize specific, well-defined geographical regions: "South Africa"South Africa
south Africa
. In 1955 ANC and other organizations call all This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 races to work together for their freedom. Nelson worked with them too. In 1962 Nelson captured from the Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).government, and
government and
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 him to isolated island to stay their for rest of his life. While he was in the jail, his wife continued to call for freedom with black This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. After that he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
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because
 they didn't found any evidence proved that he was guilty. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 that he worked This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to achieve his goal. He Participated in the Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).election, and
election and
 he became the first
 black president in Capitalize specific, well-defined geographical regions: "South Africa"South Africa
south Africa
 in 1994. He established more than two organizations in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 majors to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
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people
. 