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All languages have many portions in them. Language can affect by geography, culture, ethic, and religion. By this meaning, if we try to learn a new language, we will also learn about lots of that language is built. Learning a new language also provide a new point of view, understanding the beauty of differences and diversty. I was raised by my mother's family at the very beginning of my life. My mother is Kurdish and my father is Turkish. Although both races have lived in the same geography, they have a bunch of differences between each other, like language. Even these differences, ı have closed both cultures equally. This situation makes me a more open-minded and understanding person according to the people who were exposed to just one culture while they were raised. Learning a new language is equal to learning a different culture and also learning the beauty of differences. Understanding the diversity and beauty of it makes people feel part of the entirety.
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in the same geography, they have a bunch of
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language
. Even these
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, ı have closed both
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IELTS essay grown up in bilingual family

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
165 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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