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keeping animals by primary students

keeping animals by primary students DaJoE
Nowadays, the various practical and experimental courses beside the theoritical ones are provided to students at school. Among these kinds of scientific trainings, learning about alive creatures like animals, and herbals are the most exciting subjects for children. However, many people complain about the consequences of increasing engagement of toddlers with animals and plants. In this assay, i will mentioned some of the pros and cons of keeping pets and apartment plants by young students.
Nowadays, the various practical and experimental courses beside the
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to students at school. Among these kinds of scientific trainings, learning about alive creatures like animals, and herbals are the most exciting subjects for children.
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complain about the consequences of increasing engagement of toddlers with animals and plants. In this assay,
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some of the
pros and cons of keeping pets and apartment plants by young students.

IELTS essay keeping animals by primary students

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
75 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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