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Write an essay (200-220 words) to express your opinion on the following topic. It is said that everyone should have the responsibility to take Covid 19 vaccine but others say they have their private choice not to be vaccinated.

Write an essay (200-220 words) to express your opinion on the following topic. It is said that everyone should have the responsibility to take Covid 19 vaccine but others say they have their private choice not to be vaccinated. LqV9K
Nowadays, in the coronavirus epidemic, thanks to the Covid-19 vaccine, the world death rate is on the decrease significantly. While the citizens say that they should be responsible for getting the Covid-19 vaccination, others argue that it is their personal choice not to be vaccinated. From my perspective, I strongly believe that taking the vaccine is beneficial for everyone’s lives and also everyone’s responsibility to society. To begin with, on the one hand, Covid-19 vaccine can be conducive to human health and also their lives. Firstly, if people were vaccinated, it would be hard to be infected with coronavirus and spread to everyone. This means that when they got the covid vaccination, the tendency they are infected is low so it can prevent covid from the outbreak. Secondly, if they took the coronavirus vaccine but they are still infected, the disease would not be too serious. In fact, when people get the covid vaccination, the disease is not going to be dangerous and doesn’t lead to the dead. For example, because they have taken the covid-19 vaccine, they can easily travel and communicate with others but don’t need to worry about being infected too much. On the other hand, the coronavirus vaccine has numerous potential drawbacks. The greatest disadvantage of covid-19 vaccination is causing side effects which are often pain at the injection site, fever, headache, muscle pain or even death. Thus, if you get the vaccination, you will have an impact on your health but it just lasts for a few days. Moreover, although you were vaccinated, you also could be infected. The vaccination just reduces the ability of the danger of the disease but doesn’t completely prevent people from the pandemic. In addition, it also brings about the sequelae which are the same as those who are not vaccinated. In conclusion, it is undeniable that Covid-19 vaccination is detrimental to people’s lives. However, I still stand by my point that being vaccinated is so necessary that everyone should do it.
Nowadays, in the coronavirus epidemic, thanks to the Covid-19
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vaccine
, the world death rate is on the decrease
significantly
. While the citizens say that they should be responsible for getting the Covid-19 vaccination, others argue that it is their personal choice not to
be vaccinated
. From my perspective, I
strongly
believe that taking the
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vaccine
is beneficial for
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everyone’s
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lives
and
also
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everyone’s
responsibility to society.

To
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begin
with, on the one hand, Covid-19
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vaccine
can be conducive to human health and
also
their
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lives
.
Firstly
, if
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people
were vaccinated
, it would be
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hard
to be
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infected
with coronavirus and spread to
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everyone
. This means that when they
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got
the
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covid
vaccination, the tendency they are
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infected
is low
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so
it can
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prevent
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covid
from the outbreak.
Secondly
, if they took the coronavirus
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vaccine
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but
they are
still
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infected
, the disease would not be too serious. In fact, when
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people
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get
the
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covid
vaccination, the disease is not going to be
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dangerous
and doesn’t lead to the dead.
For example
,
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because
they have taken the
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covid-19
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vaccine
, they can
easily
travel and communicate with others
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but
don’t need to worry about being
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infected
too much.

On the other hand
, the coronavirus
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vaccine
has numerous potential drawbacks. The greatest disadvantage of
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covid-19
vaccination is causing side effects which are
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often
pain at the injection site, fever, headache, muscle pain or even death.
Thus
, if you
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get
the vaccination, you will have an impact on your health
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but
it
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just
lasts for a few days.
Moreover
, although you
were vaccinated
, you
also
could be
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infected
. The vaccination
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just
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reduces
the ability of the
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danger
of the disease
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but
doesn’t completely
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prevent
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people
from the pandemic.
In addition
, it
also
brings about the
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sequelae
which are the same as those who are not vaccinated.

In conclusion
, it is undeniable that Covid-19 vaccination is detrimental to
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people’s
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lives
.
However
, I
still
stand by my point that
being vaccinated
is
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so
necessary that
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everyone
should do it.
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IELTS essay Write an essay (200-220 words) to express your opinion on the following topic. It is said that everyone should have the responsibility to take Covid 19 vaccine but others say they have their private choice not to be vaccinated.

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