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Groverment should spend money on preventing deseases than treatmen

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Another compelling cause is that offering financial assitance for preventing deseases help people save their time on treatmen and reduce negatively effects after curing. For instance, obesity is one of the most serious issues that people are facing nowadays. individuals experience obesity could lead to high blood preasures or heart deseases or other serious consequense. In addition, it take a long time for losing thier weight to a heathy weight. Therefore, it is important to put significantly efforts of not only individuals but also govermen on preventing deasease like obesity mentioned above.

Another compelling cause is that offering financial Possible spelling mistake found.assistance
assitance
 for preventing Possible spelling mistake found.diseasesdeceases
deseases
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help
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people
 save their time on Possible spelling mistake found.treatmenttreat men
treatmen
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
negatively
 effects after curing. For instance
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people
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individuals
 experience obesity could lead to high blood Possible spelling mistake found.pressurestreasurespleasures
preasures
 or heart Possible spelling mistake found.diseasesdeceases
deseases
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consequense
. In addition
, it Did you mean "takes"?takes
take
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thier
 weight to a Possible spelling mistake found.healthyHeathheathheathsheath y
heathy
 weight. Therefore
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important
 to put significantly
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only
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but
also
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govermen
 on preventing Possible spelling mistake found.diseasedecreasedeceasediastasedegrease
deasease
 like obesity mentioned above. 