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Gross domestic product of country A

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The given illustration represents the gross domestic product of nation A. Looking from an overall perspective, it can be clearly seen that the GDP of country A experienced various fluctuation over the period 12-year. In the first 2 year, there was a slight decrease from 1200 to 900 GDP. Suddenly, the year 3 witnessed a crash in the quantity of GDP of country A, additionally it reach a bottom at about 100 GDP. Nevertheless, it was enhanced obviously that over the next 3 years, the figure of GDP of country A experienced a slight increase. The year 7 witnessed a considerable rose up from 500 to 800 GDP in 1 year. However, that figure dropped down at the same data of the year 6 the next year. As it is observed, within the 4 year period starting from the year 8, there was an upward trend that unexpectedly reach the highest point at 1600 in the year 12.
The
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given
illustration represents the gross domestic product of nation A.

Looking from an
overall
perspective, it can be
clearly
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seen
that the GDP of country A experienced various fluctuation over the period 12-year.

In the
first
2
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year
, there was a slight decrease from 1200 to 900 GDP.
Suddenly
, the
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year
3 witnessed a crash in the quantity of GDP of country A,
additionally
it
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reach
a bottom at about 100 GDP.
Nevertheless
, it
was enhanced
obviously
that over the
next
3 years, the figure of GDP of country A experienced a slight increase.

The
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year
7 witnessed a considerable rose up from 500 to 800 GDP in 1
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year
.
However
, that figure
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dropped down
at the same data of the
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year
6 the
next
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year
. As it
is observed
, within the 4
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year
period starting from the
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year
8, there was an upward trend that
unexpectedly
reach the highest point at 1600 in the
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year
12.
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IELTS essay Gross domestic product of country A

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
158 words
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