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Should students have a job while they are studying at school?

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Nowadays, it is argued whether youngsters should have a job while studying or not. In my opinion, I firmly think that students shouldn’t working while learning. To begin with, it can distract students from learning. If they choose to have a job, it will be time-consuming as we have to work for at least 4 to 6 hours per day. Doing two activities at the same time will make them feel frustrated, tired and they cannot catch up with the lessons in class. In addition, it will harm their health as well. It can lead to tiredness. Working a job and then going home to study can leave a student with little time to sleep. Some students only have 3 to 4 hours to sleep. This, in turn, can lead to fatigue, which can impact health and overall well-being. In conclusion, although having a job while studying have many benefits for the youth. However, students should prioritize studying rather than working.

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