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Green is the new black. It is trendy to visit the natural scene as a leisure activity. I possibly propose a tourist to visit Hong Kong, Wetland Park. It has some of South China's most striking and valuable natural landscapes. Also, It satisfied visitors to encounter a vast diversity of wetland creatures and provided visitors with opportunities to observe wildlife. When Westerners talk about Chinese cuisine, they often refer to Cantonese cuisine. Dim sum and siu mei are particularly well-known and they have become must-order dishes for tourists visiting Hong Kong. Therefore, I would suggest "Lin Heung Tea House” restaurants. It conquered a tourist with the variety of cuisines that it could offer. To visit Ocean Park interests tourists who come to Hong Kong. Ocean Park must-go attraction for families with kids who can easily spend a whole day there riding on thrilling amusement rides and watching amazing performances. In some theme parks like Ocean Park, kids can even have educational lessons on the conservation of wildlife species. It seems to me that trying and talking to local people would be the best way for a tourist to learn about Hong Kong. locals will love to share their passion and love of place with a tourist. They alongside visiting those tourist spots, try and talk to locals to get their point of view for interesting things to do in that city. A tourist may find hidden gems or an amazing restaurant. Besides, a tourist may discover our culture unique with Hong Kong residents.
Green is the new black. It is trendy to visit the natural scene as a leisure activity. I
possibly
propose a
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tourist
to visit Hong Kong, Wetland
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Park
. It has
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some
of South China's most striking and valuable natural landscapes.

Also
, It satisfied visitors to encounter a vast diversity of wetland creatures and provided visitors with opportunities to observe wildlife.

When Westerners talk about Chinese cuisine, they
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often
refer to Cantonese cuisine. Dim sum and
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siu
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mei
are
particularly
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well-known and
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must
-order dishes for
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tourists
visiting Hong Kong.
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, I would suggest
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Lin
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Heung
Tea
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” restaurants. It conquered a
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with the variety of cuisines that it could offer.

To visit Ocean
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Park
interests
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tourists
who
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come
to Hong Kong. Ocean
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Park
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must
-go attraction for families with kids who can
easily
spend a whole day there riding on thrilling amusement rides and watching amazing performances. In
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some
theme
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parks
like Ocean
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Park
, kids can even have educational lessons on the conservation of wildlife species.

It seems to me that trying and talking to local
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people
would be the best way for a
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tourist
to learn about Hong Kong.
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locals
will
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love
to share their passion and
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love
of place with a
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tourist
. They alongside visiting those
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spots,
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try and
talk to locals to
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get
their point of view for interesting things to do in that city. A
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may find hidden gems or an amazing restaurant.
Besides
, a
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tourist
may discover our culture unique with Hong Kong residents.
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IELTS essay Green is the new black. It is

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
253 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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