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- Mr. Syed Ali Shahul Hammed – the chairman of meeting who is also representing for Berjaya Leisure (Cayman) Ltd – owns 240.000.000.000 dong capital, accounting for 75% of charter capital. - Mr. Ho Duc Thanh – representing for D2D Co., Ltd – owned member 80.000.000.000 dong capital, accounting for 25% of charter capital. - Mr. Phuong Anh Phat – the Secretary of meeting who is legal representative of the enterprise Absent: 0

- Mr. Syed Ali Shahul Hammed – the chairman of meeting who is also representing for Berjaya Leisure (Cayman) Ltd – owns 240. 000. 000. 000 dong capital, accounting for 75% of charter capital. - Mr. Ho Duc Thanh – representing for D2D Co. , Ltd – owned member 80. 000. 000. 000 dong capital, accounting for 25% of charter capital. - Mr. Phuong Anh Phat – the Secretary of meeting who is legal representative of the enterprise Absent: 0 dpQXd
- Mr. Syed Ali Shahul Hammed – the chairman of meeting who is also representing for Berjaya Leisure (Cayman) Ltd – owns 240. 000. 000. 000 dong capital, accounting for 75% of charter capital. - Mr. Ho Duc Thanh – representing for D2D Co. , Ltd – owned member 80. 000. 000. 000 dong capital, accounting for 25% of charter capital. - Mr. Phuong Anh Phat – the Secretary of meeting who is legal representative of the enterprise Absent: 0
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Mr.
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Syed
Ali
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Shahul
Hammed
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the chairman of meeting who is
also
representing for
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Berjaya
Leisure (Cayman) Ltd
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owns
240. 000. 000. 000 dong capital, accounting for 75% of charter capital.

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Mr. Ho
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Duc
Thanh
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–
representing for D2D Co.
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Ltd
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–
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owned
member 80. 000. 000. 000 dong capital, accounting for 25% of charter capital.

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Mr.
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Phuong
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Anh
Phat
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the Secretary of meeting who is legal representative of the enterprise

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IELTS essay - Mr. Syed Ali Shahul Hammed – the chairman of meeting who is also representing for Berjaya Leisure (Cayman) Ltd – owns 240. 000. 000. 000 dong capital, accounting for 75% of charter capital. - Mr. Ho Duc Thanh – representing for D2D Co. , Ltd – owned member 80. 000. 000. 000 dong capital, accounting for 25% of charter capital. - Mr. Phuong Anh Phat – the Secretary of meeting who is legal representative of the enterprise Absent: 0

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