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As operations staff, what is the biggest challenge that you will face in managing the products and warehouse? Then, what will you do to overcome that challenge?

As operations staff, what is the biggest challenge that you will face in managing the products and warehouse? Then, what will you do to overcome that challenge? J3xkD
Product and warehouse is an inseparable unit. The warehouse will not be useful if there are no product and product will not safety if nothing warehouse. I mean that warehouse is part of a company's logistics system which is have functions to store product such as raw materials, semi-finished products, finished products, and aims to provide information to management about status, condition, and disposition of product stored. In my opinion the biggest challenge in managing the products and warehouse is how to handle the stock in and out be effective. I mean that our production must be balance with the demand from our customer, not to much or less. Because if to much product in our warehouse in a long time the quality of product will decrease, expired and it will make buildups of obsolete inventory and warehouse become full or nothing space. Also if the product in our warehouse less than our demand it will make our corresponding lost revenue and profit decrease. So, to overcome this problem I will make a operation system connected with demand forecast for accurate information and also make sure the date, quantity, about the manufacture's capability for Original Equipment Manufaturer (OEM). With this activity division of operation can make a planning about when, how much, how long to start the order or production. So that, the inventory of product in warehouse can distribute well and the supply chain will be effective. The production process is maintained and running as it should.
Product
and warehouse is an inseparable unit. The warehouse will not be useful if there are no
product
and
product
will not safety if nothing warehouse. I mean that warehouse is part of a
company
's logistics system which is have functions to store
product
such as raw materials, semi-finished
products
, finished
products
, and aims to provide information to management about status, condition, and disposition of
product
stored.

In my opinion the biggest challenge in managing the
products
and warehouse is how to handle the stock in and out be effective. I mean that our production
must
be balance with the demand from our customer, not
to
much or less.
Because
if
to
much
product
in our warehouse in a long time the quality of
product
will decrease, expired and it will
make
buildups of obsolete inventory and warehouse become full or nothing space.
Also
if the
product
in our warehouse less than our demand it will
make
our corresponding lost revenue and profit decrease.

So
, to overcome this problem I will
make
a
operation system
connected with demand forecast for accurate information and
also
make
sure the date, quantity, about the manufacture's capability for Original Equipment
Manufaturer
(OEM). With this activity division of operation can
make
a planning about when, how much, how long to
start
the order or production.
So
that, the inventory of
product
in warehouse can distribute well and the supply chain will be effective. The production process
is maintained
and running as it should.
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IELTS essay As operations staff, what is the biggest challenge that you will face in managing the products and warehouse? Then, what will you do to overcome that challenge?

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