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The graph illustrates the use of fish and various meats by the per person per week in European country between 1979 and 2004. Here three types of meats given in graph and use of them is measured in grams. Firstly usage of fish has been decreasing slightly every year which was under 50 grams by the year 2004. As for lamb, Usage of it has been also reduced a lot which was 150 grams in 1979. Beef which was most popular in 1979 is not that much popular in 2004 since the place was taken by chicken which was used little less than 150 grams in 1979.
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of fish and various meats by the per person per week in European country between 1979 and 2004. Here three types of meats
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by the year 2004. As for lamb, Usage of it has been
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a lot which was 150
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in 1979. Beef which was most popular in 1979 is not that much popular in 2004 since the place
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IELTS essay graph for consumption of fish and meat

Essay
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1 paragraphs
107 words
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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